I like this weird intersected object and the clean textures cutting across the surfaces. A wood panel and a bright white painted along with glitchy polygons make it look like this is CG but it has a very tangible feel to it and is quite ambiguous.
On another note I also like the composition of the double image with the split in the frame and a slightly zoomed in shot on the right. I like how the type is included in the enlargement and is cropped in an interesting way. Perhaps I could play with something like that in motion and break the expected single 16:9 frame by cutting up some images. Some glitchy jump cuts could work well here and create a slightly eccentric sense to the pieces.