Obviously the logo treatment needs work to soften the CG look by perhaps replacing or just dirtying up the cut face, and maybe adding some geometry cuts or changing the displacement map settings to add more detail around the edges. Overall I think the colour grade is working and once the other environments start to form I think the series of frames will work as planned as a series of posters/billboards to put the audience in the journey.
Styleframe composite
Obviously the logo treatment needs work to soften the CG look by perhaps replacing or just dirtying up the cut face, and maybe adding some geometry cuts or changing the displacement map settings to add more detail around the edges. Overall I think the colour grade is working and once the other environments start to form I think the series of frames will work as planned as a series of posters/billboards to put the audience in the journey.